Perfect

Apr. 9th, 2009 10:45 pm
grianchloch: (Jensen A)
[personal profile] grianchloch
Title: Perfect
Fandom: Supernatural RPS
Pairing/character: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 692
Disclaimer: Sadly, they aren't mine, I'm just playing with them for a while.
Notes: Originally written for a prompt posted on [livejournal.com profile] comment_fic and posted here. The subject was magic and the prompt, posted by [livejournal.com profile] iniq, was "RPS, Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles, too perfect". I think I'll be returning to this little universe again :)

People, outsiders, think he’s quiet, reserved, shy. They think he’s pretty and perfect and he goes along with that, even to the point of blushing, all the time smirking inside at what they would think if they knew the truth, if they ever got a glimpse of his true nature.

He hides it well, for the most part. Hides the power that crackles along his nerve endings when Jared is close to him, touches him, makes him laugh so hard his ribs hurt.

The blood in his veins turns to fire when Jared lightly rests a hand on the small of his back. Paradoxically, that same touch grounds him when the world tries to intrude into their lives a little too far. It gives him the strength to hold back, to keep in check the power that could burn an adversary alive from the inside out with no more than a look.

He likes the irony. On the show, Sam is the one who struggles with his demonic side, walks a fine line between darkness and light while Dean frets and worries. In reality, Jensen got a handle on his dark side a long time ago and has walked that line all his life.

His family gave him the strength he needed growing up to take what was a curse and turn it into a gift and now he has Jared, Jared who loves him for all that he is.

When they are alone, and Jensen lets down his guard, his eyes flare emerald bright as Jared stands on the far side of the room and undresses, teasing, slowly pushing his jeans down over his hips. There’s a challenge in the way the younger man looks at Jensen, and Jensen smirks, knowing what Jared wants.

He lets his gaze rake over Jared’s body, admires his rampant cock from where he stands, and smiles darkly as unleashes the power within him and Jared is assaulted by sensation, by unseen fingers and warm wet tongues dragging across his skin, wrapping around his cock and pushing deep inside him.

Jared falls to his knees, shaking, trembling as he’s taken, his body and mind overdosing on pure pleasure. Jensen walks round him, tasting him, kissing him, biting him, fucking him, all without a single touch. He can feel every movement of Jared’s body, savour every drop of sweat beading on his skin

Jared falls forward onto all fours and looks up at Jensen. His pupils are blown and he’s begging silently for more. Lust and want and need and love curl and squirm inside Jensen and he falls to his knees in front of his lover and frees his own erection, watching with a deep groan as Jared crawls the few feet between them despite the way his body is being assaulted in every way possible, and wraps his lips around Jensen’s cock.

Jared’s greedy mouth devours him, needy and wanton, tongue stuttering around the hard flesh, sucking it down until his nose collides with a toned stomach and Jensen’s hands dig into his hair so hard it hurts but Jared is beyond caring, beyond thought, and whimpers for more. Jensen’s orgasm hits. His head snaps back as he comes down Jared’s throat with a possessive growl, letting the younger man milk every last drop from him in an effort to swallow him whole. Body still thrumming, he pulls out, tilting Jared’s head up to look into his eyes as he overloads his lover, intent on seeing him come apart, using tendrils of power to fuck into him hard, to engulf him and Jared screams and comes into a mouth that exists only for his pleasure.

Before Jared’s limbs give out, Jensen helps him to the bed and cleans him up before joining him. Jared snuggles closer and looks up at Jensen, touching his face with shaky fingers.

“Perfect.” He whispers.

Jensen chuckles and shakes his head and Jared falls into a deep sleep as Jensen watches over him. No, he’s not perfect, far from it, but he’s found the perfect mate in Jared. And he’ll keep him safe from harm no matter what it takes.

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Date: 2009-04-10 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kate-mct.livejournal.com
*Brain has melted* Holy crap!! That was fantastic, please continue this universe!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!

I'll do my best ;)

Date: 2009-04-10 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glimmerella.livejournal.com
Beyond hot!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2009-04-10 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelsusie.livejournal.com
oh god yes please do!!! i loved that!!!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
*g* Thank you!

I'll see what I can come up with :)

Date: 2009-04-10 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilovesn.livejournal.com
YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO need to write more

Its sooooooo good

Date: 2009-04-10 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
*giggles*

Thank you!!

Date: 2009-04-10 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winyumi.livejournal.com
Wow. This is awesome. I'm crossing my fingers that you continue this verse.

Date: 2009-04-10 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!

I've got a few deas floating around that might get posted :)

Date: 2009-04-10 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atsugari8.livejournal.com
What a rush! :D that was so incredibly intense! it was like watching a skilled predator at play! I love how Jensen is able to manhandle control Jared like that *shivers in delight*.

This line stuck with me:
In reality, Jensen got a handle on his dark side a long time ago and has walked that line all his life.
I just love how he's so well adjusted with his powers and just embracing it to do wicked wicked things :D.

Hope you do play more in this universe :D

Thank you so much for sharing!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
it was like watching a skilled predator at play!

I'm so glad to hear that because that's exactly how I wanted him to come across!

Thanks for reading, and I do have some more ideas I'm mseeing with for this little 'verse :)

Date: 2009-04-10 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mystik-ivanow.livejournal.com
AWESOME.


*puddle on the floor*

Date: 2009-04-10 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

*mops you up*

Date: 2009-04-10 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ekaanta.livejournal.com
Yes, it was hot *fans self*. On the other hand there are many unanswered questions. This verse holds so many potentials it'll be a waste not to exploit it. :) *winks winks*

Date: 2009-04-10 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

This verse holds so many potentials

I have got some ideas to play around with which show him using the power he's got for more than just getting Jared off. Not that there wouldn't be more of that too ;)

Date: 2009-04-10 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamers-dh.livejournal.com
Hot and romantic at the end.
Very good!
I want to know more about this verse!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading!

Hopefully more to come soon :)

Date: 2009-04-10 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piratebo.livejournal.com
LOVED IT! ♥

Date: 2009-04-10 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Date: 2009-04-10 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elless18.livejournal.com
Well, that's not an aspect of magic I've ever considered before. Wow. Very powerful (and hot!) in so few words. I hope you write more!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!

And I love your icon :)

Date: 2009-04-10 12:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovetheguys.livejournal.com
Very hot and supremely well-written!

Love, Robin

Date: 2009-04-10 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2009-04-10 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katbcoll.livejournal.com
Oh WOW!! Fantastic! I wouldn't say no to reading more of this 'verse. *G* And in conclusion *points to icon*

Date: 2009-04-10 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
*giggles at icon*

Glad you enjoyed it, and I'll see what I can do :)

Date: 2009-04-10 05:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] macbyrne.livejournal.com
I demand MORE!!! Powers!Jensen is SO hot! PLease more more more!

Date: 2009-04-10 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
*g* I'll see what I can do!

And I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2009-04-10 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tobbles-plink.livejournal.com
Words, words, I need words. Oh dear Lord, I do believe you've broken my brain. Great job!

Date: 2009-04-10 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
*giggles*

*patches your brain together with duct tape*

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2009-04-11 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com
Holy shit! I think my laptop just burst into flames! To mems immediately! Oh, and like others, I want more! Turn it into a 'verse!
Edited Date: 2009-04-11 07:07 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-11 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Oh noes!! *grabs a fire extingusher*

Glad you enjoyed it! And I'll see what I can do :)

Date: 2009-04-11 07:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selinamoonfire.livejournal.com
This is so incredibly hot. I think you shorted out my brain.

Date: 2009-04-11 09:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!

*pets brain*

Date: 2009-04-11 08:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] perkyandproud.livejournal.com
Wow! That was really good, thank you for posting it! :-)

Must go fan myself now...

Date: 2009-04-11 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it :)

*fans you*

Date: 2009-04-11 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sierrawyndsong.livejournal.com
ooohhhh this is so sinfully delicious :)

Date: 2009-04-11 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2009-04-11 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayfray18.livejournal.com
Wow, that was amazing.

Date: 2009-04-11 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2009-04-11 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babyreaper.livejournal.com
Fantastic, hope your going to post another chapter soon. Can't wait..

Date: 2009-04-11 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2009-04-12 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsy-atavari.livejournal.com
I'll add my voice to the chorus of "moaaarrrr!" for this story. This was intense and vaguely ominous there at the end. Would love to see this expanded into a whole verse. :-)

Date: 2009-04-12 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it!

and vaguely ominous there at the end

Heh, yes, if it's continued, the story will take darker turns :)

Date: 2009-04-12 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gerri71.livejournal.com
Very descriptive and a lovely look into how they feel.

Date: 2009-04-12 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2009-04-13 02:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] secondheartbeat.livejournal.com
That was very intense. I am interested to find out more about these powers. Even though obviously this has answered the question about what 'fun' uses come with the power. Mwahaha.
That was hot.

Date: 2009-04-17 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Yes, there is more to his powers which will come out in future instalments, but there'll be more "fun" too ;)

Date: 2009-04-14 05:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] angels3.livejournal.com
WOW!

That was awesome. Loved it.

Date: 2009-04-17 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delanach.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!
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