Crying, I am. Very, very well written, this is. Just excellent, and I can see a dam about to break, I can see Lex giving in soon, so it gives me that same hope.
(I noticed one typo, if you're interested in that kind of thing: "chocking back the laughter" meant to be "choking back the laughter.")
This piece is so excellent. This is the kind of thing I read and think, "Why can't I write like that?" Thanks so very much for sharing it.
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Date: 2008-05-13 12:54 am (UTC)(I noticed one typo, if you're interested in that kind of thing: "chocking back the laughter" meant to be "choking back the laughter.")
This piece is so excellent. This is the kind of thing I read and think, "Why can't I write like that?" Thanks so very much for sharing it.