Eeek! Oh my goodness! Sweetie, this was incredible - thank you so much!
What a hot, rich, undeniably sweet story. God, I loved everything about it; it hit all my kinks and I didn't want it to end.
The characterizations were believable and interesting. I loved mischievous!Sam - "Nu huh. You said anything." *cracks up* - and jealous, needy, open Dean is one of my all-time favorites, and you hit that hard.
The comedy was fresh and funny - Dean's genetic latent superpower - and the easy slide from brotherly banter to the needyouwantyou exchanges made the climax so natural, so hot.
Speaking of the sex - which was hot like burning, right from the first time Dean lounged against the wall and looked Sam up and down *fans self* - it was so much better than I'd imagined when thinking of the prompt. Thinking back, I'd kind of imagined a quick, PWP storyline to some variation of BET + LESSON = SEX. But you did so much more; you gave it plot and character development, through things like the subtle reveal of Kevin's looks being similar to Dean's, that looking back, the end result could be seen all along - nothing jarring or out of place.
I'm so glad you chose this prompt. I couldn't have hoped for anything better - a massive THANK YOU!!
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Date: 2010-01-01 10:56 pm (UTC)What a hot, rich, undeniably sweet story. God, I loved everything about it; it hit all my kinks and I didn't want it to end.
The characterizations were believable and interesting. I loved mischievous!Sam - "Nu huh. You said anything." *cracks up* - and jealous, needy, open Dean is one of my all-time favorites, and you hit that hard.
The comedy was fresh and funny - Dean's genetic latent superpower - and the easy slide from brotherly banter to the needyouwantyou exchanges made the climax so natural, so hot.
Speaking of the sex - which was hot like burning, right from the first time Dean lounged against the wall and looked Sam up and down *fans self* - it was so much better than I'd imagined when thinking of the prompt. Thinking back, I'd kind of imagined a quick, PWP storyline to some variation of BET + LESSON = SEX. But you did so much more; you gave it plot and character development, through things like the subtle reveal of Kevin's looks being similar to Dean's, that looking back, the end result could be seen all along - nothing jarring or out of place.
I'm so glad you chose this prompt. I couldn't have hoped for anything better - a massive THANK YOU!!
I hope you had an awesome holiday and New Year's!